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What do you think of Sporto78's story
Excellent
 
33.3333333333% (1)
Good
 
0% (0)
Just ok
 
0% (0)
Not so good
 
0% (0)
It sucks, don't bother finishing it.
 
0% (0)
I don't feel like reading it at this time, but thank you for your oh so fine offer
 
100% (3)
sporto78
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Posted at 8:34 am, 1st June 2002
Ok, I don't mean to spam (if this does so classify as), but I would like some of everyone's opinions. I have been working on a short story based in the System Shock 2 universe. I have posted it at sshock2.com but have gotten little response. Therefore, if any of you have the time and desire to read it, I'd like to know what all of you think about it and/or if you have any suggestions. Thanks guys.

Part 1: http://www.sshock2.com/fanworks/stories/story40.htm

Part 2: http://www.sshock2.com/fanworks/stories/story39.htm


Oh, and dobberman, if you don't like this topic, sorry.

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Simmo666
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Posted at 10:25 am, 1st June 2002
I think I'll read it later.

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Dobberman
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Posted at 10:58 am, 1st June 2002
I'll let it pass Wink I'll read it later, I'm alittle tired atm.
No matter what I choose, no matter how much I buy, the ones I love will always be the ones who pay. Whatever life holds in store for me, I will never forget these words, "with great parents comes great reliability." This is my gift; their purse. Who am I? I'm Dobberman.
Scooter
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Posted at 12:00 pm, 1st June 2002
It is five o'clock in the morning for me. Yes, I woke up and decided to get a head start on catching up to all you people east of me (which would be almost everybody). I'll read it when I'm fully awake.

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sporto78
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Posted at 7:52 pm, 3rd June 2002
Jeez guys, is it so bad that NONE of you will read it? Sad

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Simmo666
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Posted at 8:04 pm, 3rd June 2002
Sorry, I forgot.

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Dobberman
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Posted at 8:14 pm, 3rd June 2002
oops, me too, sorry!
No matter what I choose, no matter how much I buy, the ones I love will always be the ones who pay. Whatever life holds in store for me, I will never forget these words, "with great parents comes great reliability." This is my gift; their purse. Who am I? I'm Dobberman.
Simmo666
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Posted at 8:52 pm, 3rd June 2002
If I could vote again, I'd say excellent. I didn't read it though, TextaloudMP3 did! That engineering technician, those 3 crewmen, and that other civilian at the end, eew! Since Ive never played System Shock 2, I assume that's what it's like. Well written. Wink

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REMEMBER: Scooter crashed the SQL Server on 25th November 2002 - really? did he? i forgot that